剑桥雅思13写作范文(热门6篇)

剑桥雅思13写作范文 第1篇

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant。

剑桥雅思13写作范文 第2篇

1. 对解析的说明

很多考鸭，很想把以下两个句子

1) International bodies could seek to bypass the official structures of countries with political problems that hinder the growth of sufficient food.

2) They could do this by offering food, training and resources to people in areas of sympathetic neighbouring countries, close to the relevant national borders.

组合起来，得到

3) International bodies could seek to bypass the official structures of countries with political problems that hinder the growth of sufficient food by offering food, training and resources to people in areas of sympathetic neighbouring countries, close to the relevant national borders.

句子变长了，美美地符合了考鸭“把句子写长”的标准，且符合语法，语义也完全可以理解。

但是，不行。3) 句太长，是不符合英文写作规范的，所以需要想办法拆开成为两句。

擅长英文写作的人，不是机械地把大量信息扔到一个句子里边让句子边长，而是考虑哪些信息必须写成一句，并通过适时地断句让读者更容易理解自己的表达。

知乎上有一个问题“非洲为什么这么穷？

很多去过非洲的答主都说到：因为非洲人非常懒，有地不种。

这可以用来答题吗？

不能。不是因为“懒”不能成为理由，而是因为没能把“懒”和题干中的 the advances made in agriculture 结合起来。

2. 重点词汇

seek

To try; endeavor 努力

1) seek to do good

2) At the same time we will seek to deliver attractive returns to our shareholders.

bypass

To avoid (an obstacle) by using an alternative channel, passage, or route 绕过

1) They offer a green way to get around, with the chance to bypass petrol stations.

2) Now there is a way to bypass those costly text-message fees when you are online.

precarious

Dangerously lacking in security or stability 缺乏稳定性的

resilient

Able to recover readily, as from misfortune

1) Recent research shows that biodiversity makes forests more resilient to drought.

剑桥雅思13写作范文 第3篇

There are two maps shown. The first of which shows the City Hospital in 2007 and the second shows changes made in 2010.

In 2007, we can clearly see that the city hospital was surrounded by a ring road and to the south on 'Hospital Road' there were 6 bus stops, 3 on each side and a Staff and Public Car park on the east side of the road.

By 2010, several changes had been made. The ring road remained, but now included a roundabout to the south that connect Hospital Road and a new large bus station, to replace the bus stops On the east side of the hospital, there was a new Public car Park, with the old area now being used solely for staff.

In summary, the development has increased the space for drivers as well as the use of public transport. It has eliminated some of the problems due to traffic flow.

范文译文：

题中有两张图。第一张图显示的是2007年的市医院,第二张图显示的是2010年的一些变化。

在2007年,我们可以很清晰地看到市医院由一条环路围绕,南边是医院路,附有6个公交车站,每侧有3个,路东还有一个员工与公共停车场。

到2010年时,发生了一些变化。环路仍然维持原状,但现在南边加了一个环岛,与医院路连接起来。还有一处新建的大型公交车站,取代了原来的几个公交车站。在医院东侧,有一处新的公共停车场,而原有的停车场改为仅供员工使用

总之,这次开发增加了停车的空间以及公共交通。这样就消除了交通流量带来的一些问题。

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剑桥雅思13写作范文 第4篇

开头段

（立场应该明确，虽然probably表示的是可能性，但是它指的是可能性很大，这是明确的）

主体段1：会引起的问题

主题句

问题1

问题2

举例论证

主体段2：反驳——虽然是问题，但是不严重

举例论证1

举例论证2

结尾段

重点词汇

1) adept

very skilled; proficient; expert

2) 题干信息living in a coutry where you have to speak a foreign language的替换

3) 题干信息social problems, as well as practical problems的替换

4) civic values

The Civic values Are principles of conduct centered on personal relationships within a society and serve to maintain social order.

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

剑桥雅思13写作范文 第5篇

开头段

The relative importance of more practical subjects like science and technology compared with history, for example, is an issue that continues to be relevant in modern society. In my view, despite the obvious importance of such practical subjects in daily life, history is significantly more important due to the contribution it makes to society, and most notably to the maintenance of world peace.

主体段1：讨论观点2

主题句1

举例论证1

举例论证2

主体段2：讨论观点1

主题句2

举例论证1

举例论证2（没有相应背景知识，这个例子就看不懂了）

结尾段

In summary, learning about science and technology at school is important because of its utility in many everyday situations. However, the study of history is more important because it provides the knowledge which is necessary to inspire countries to pursue peace and help poorer nations.

常见坑

Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 这类题型开头段引入观点的部分，不能用改写题目的方式写！

你可以打开自己写过的这个类型的作文。如果开头段用的是改写题目的方法，看完开头段之后看主体段的第一句，应该会发现信息特别重复！

因为这类题目的文章结构是一个主体段讨论一个观点，那每个主体段第一句就需要告诉读者要讨论的观点（题干中的观点必然要重复出现）。如范文中的

1) Those who argue that science and technology outrank history in terms of significance in school curricula typically assert that ...

2) Nevertheless, I agree with those who suggest that an awareness of human history brings benefits which are much greater than those offered by studying technical subjects.

黑体部分是对题干信息的改写（就算表达不重复，信息必然是相同的，这不可避免）。

所以，范文的开头段的2个部分：

1) The relative importance of more practical subjects like science and technology compared with history, for example, is an issue that continues to be relevant in modern society.（和题目相关，但非题干信息）

2) In my view, despite the obvious importance of such practical subjects in daily life, history is significantly more important due to the contribution it makes to society, and most notably to the maintenance of world peace.（个人观点部分，既然是讨论2个观点后得到的结论，这里肯定有信息和两个观点信息重合，不可避免）

既然信息重复很多，在可以不重复的情况下，就应该尽量避免重复。所以，这类题目的开头段不使用改写题目的方式。

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?。

剑桥雅思13写作范文 第6篇

The two maps shown are the before and after of a planned university sports centre development.

In the first diagram, it shows the current state of the centre with a 25m pool in the centre surrounded by changing rooms, seating and a gym. The reception is on the southern side, near the entrance. There are two outdoor courts on the east and west sides

The plan includes replacing the western courts with a leisure pool and the eastern ones with a sports hall and two small dance studios. The gym has also been extended to the east. Changing rooms have been added in the south east and south west corners to facilitate these new additions Near the entrance these is a new Sports shop on the left as you enter and a small cafe on the right

In summary, we can see that, with the new development, the centre is able to offer people a much wider choice of sport that will benefit all。

译文：

两幅地图显示的是一处大学体育中心在规划前后的布局。

第一幅图表明了体育中心现在的布局,中央有一个25米长的泳池,周围有更衣室、观众席和健身馆。接待处位于南边靠近入口的位置。另外东西两侧还有两个室外球场。

规划图中把西侧的球场改成了游乐池,东侧球场改成了体育馆和两个练舞房。健身馆也向东进行了扩建。另外还在东南和西南角新增了更衣室以配合这些新增场馆。靠近入口的地方左侧有一处新建的体育商店,右侧有一处咖啡馆。

总之,我们可以看到,在新的规划中,该体育中心能够给人们提供更多的运动选择,能让大家都受益。