2021上海中考英语作文范文(汇总21篇)

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第1篇

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around mountains are covered with all kinds of green the town runs a small ’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the the children of the school age can go to anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第2篇

I want to invent a time machine

As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learning about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learning from a textbook. That’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I cannot only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out.

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对学生现在的生活

亮点二：用would rather … than … 表达学生的意愿

亮点三：用if条件状语从句表达主题

亮点四：be famous for 因…而著名

亮点五：not only … but … as well 不但…而且…

亮点六：用动名词词组做主语

亮点七：用idiom突出历史的重要性

亮点八：定语从句表达学生的期待

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第3篇

（作文）（20分）

at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短

文，标点符号不占格）

雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们∶人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在 Willard

的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想。

请以_Everyone can be special（天生我才）_为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻。（注意∶1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第4篇

1。 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。

2。 动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3。 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4。 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。

The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5。 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第5篇

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第6篇

VII. Writing (作文)（共20分）

94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’m ready”(以“我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标题符号不占格)

你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬，为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

The following is for reference only.(以下内容及供参考)

   Independent       be good at...

   Responsible       take part in...

   Hardworking      it helps me to...

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第7篇

1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me， _There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。_ I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， _Where did you go?_ she gave me this simple answer， _To my neighbors — they are hungry also!_

3。 用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后：

The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

_Little boy， why are you standing here crying?_ they asked。

_I want Mom， I go home。_ said the boy， still crying。

_Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。_

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第8篇

Ⅶ．Writing（作文）（共20分）

94．Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟．请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会．

Don't judge people by their could be bad-looking and still be nice.     ----Katie

When your friends do something stupid, you don't have to follow.                  ----Jackie

Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework, especially if you don't have a dog.     ----Alex

Life is like a_choose your own ending_book-you can take whatever adventures you want. ---Sally

（注意：1．先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上．

2．短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第9篇

I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot

I want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far as I’m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons:

First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations.

Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.

In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society.

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：全文巧用“first, furthermore, in short” 等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。

亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。

亮点三：文中出现了“extremely, make contribution to” 这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第10篇

I want to invent a robot

Currently, there is a growing awareness that students have a lot of pressure. I want to invent a robot that can help us solve it.

On one hand, it can be regarded as a teacher, that is to say, as long as we are confronted with the problems, we can ask them for help. On the other hand, it enables us to feel relaxed because of the pressure. In other words, it is necessary for us to be faced with the difficulties when it gives us a smile. To calm down helps us to think clearly and make the best decision for us. That’s what I have learnt from its smile.

In a word, the robot not only gives us a helping hand, but also encourages us to discover the power lying within ourselves and achieve our goals.

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对阐述对现状的焦虑

亮点二：用as long as 引导状语从句，抓人眼球

亮点三：to calm down 非谓语结构

亮点四： a helping hand 词组搭配更高端

亮点五：每句不同词组转换

亮点六：结尾升华

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第11篇

Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant):

球类(Ball Games) 演讲(Speech) 器乐(Instrumental Music)

戏剧(Drama) 手工(Handicrafts) 摄影(Photography)

假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。

（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

Dear Mr. Zhang,  

I am writing to you to apply for the teaching assistant for our instrumental music lesson. The reason why I am interested in this job is that I love music and I have got the level-10 certificates of both piano and guitar. Besides, music is a way to deepen our understanding of the world as well as a way to relax ourselves. I hope more students will find its beauty through this course, which is certainly my goal. Being the teaching assistant is exactly what I am good at and what I desire. I really hope you can give me this opportunity.

Sincerely,  

Li Hua

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第12篇

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第13篇

Shanghai Disneyland will be open soon, as the day is so close, there are all kinds of trial run information released. The public is so looking forward to it and they want to have the honor become the first visitors. While after scanning the released information, they feel unsatisfied.

上海迪士尼乐园很快就要开放了,由于距离开放日子是如此的接近,各种各样的试行信息发布了出来。公众是如此的期待,他们希望能有荣幸成为第一批游客。然而在浏览了发布信息后,他们感到不满意。

The first is about the high entrance ticket. According to the average ticket of about 400 RMB, a family always need to pay at least for 3 persons, which means it takes them more than 1000 RMB. It is only the lowest budget for the local visitors, while for the nonlocal visitors, they need to pay for the hotel, which is a great expense.

第一个是关于高价格的门票。根据平均一张门票约400元,一个家庭总是需要支付至少3人,这意味着他们需要支付超过1000元人民币。然而最低的预算只是对于当地游客来说,而对于外地游客,他们需要支付酒店,这是一笔巨大的开销。

The second is the food in Disneyland. The offcial website has listed the price that offered in the amusement park. A beef burger with cheese is 80 RMB, a child-sized hot dog is 60 RMB and so on. Many people think it is such high price for them to pay. In that way, a family only pays for the food will cost more than 500 RMB!

第二个是迪斯尼乐园的食物。官方网站列出了游乐园提供的食物价格。一个牛肉汉堡和奶酪是80元,一个儿童的热狗是60元等等。许多人认为这是很高的价格。这样的话,一个家庭光支付食物就要超过500元!

The trial run of Shanghai Disneyland exposes many problems and the public concerns about the price. Maybe adjusting the price can attracts more tourists.

上海迪士尼乐园的试行反应了许多问题，公众关心的是价格。也许调整价格可以吸引更多的游客。

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第14篇

VII. Writing (作文): (共20分)

99. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)

      Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too

much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）

（注意：文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Dear Betty,

I’m sorry to know that you are worried about a coming exam because of caring too much about the result. There’s no need to worry about it because you are always good at study. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to know how much knowledge we have mastered by taking an exam. I

think you should have a good rest instead of doing too much exercise because it may make you more nervous. Besides, you can share your feelings with your classmates. It’s useful to share your bad emotion with others, which helps you feel better. I believe that you will try your best to

overcome the upset emotion and do well in the exam.

Yours,

Joe.

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第15篇

导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下

正文：

第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成_总—分—总_结构

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第16篇

IX. Writing（作文）：（共18分）

106. Write at least 60 words about the topic”I’m proud of myself”.（以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Use the following points as reference.（以下内容仅供参考）

What kind of person are you?

What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples)

Why are you proud of yourself?

I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. However, as we all know, the students of Grade Nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up, but my parents encouraged me: _Impossible is nothing,_ _you could challenge yourself!_

So with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第17篇

I want to invent a time machine

If I have the ability to invent something that could make life better, the first thing that comes into my mind is a time machine. With its help, people could go back to the past conveniently.

We unavoidably make some mistakes that we regret so much, it’s fantastic if we could get another chance to fix it. Besides, it is of great importance to the aged people if they are able toenjoy their youth for a second time.

Although it sounds like an impossible dream to realize, I still believe with the rapid development of science and technology, my idea will become reality some day.

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：the first thing that comes into mind 首先映入脑海的是。

亮点二：conveniently方便地，便利地。

亮点三：be of great importance名词结构更高端。

亮点四：使用be able to短语替换掉could，避免重复。

亮点五：with the rapid development of science and technology随着科学和技术的迅速发展。

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第18篇

VII. Writing（作文）（共20分）

94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “There’s always hope”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身或他人的经历）。

The following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考）

get out of difficulty

give … a hand

never lose hope

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第19篇

106．Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of___________”.（以“我是......的一员”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。

Use the following points as reference:

Are you glad to be a member of……?

What do you do in it?

How do you feel as such a member?

I’m a member of my family

I’m a member of my family. We always help each other and we always face difficulties together. When my father lost his job, my mum and I always encouraged him to be confidence. When I’m still writing homework at eleven o’clock, my parents will give me a cup of milk and a piece of bread. They won’t sleep until I have finished all homework. We love each other and I’m glad to be a member of my family.

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第20篇

VII. Writing (作文) (共20分)

99. Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”. (以”如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。

Phrases for reference(以下短语仅供参考)：

ask…for help   calm down

in danger   prevent. . . from

(注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)

As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous fire situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is known to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. What’s more, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. In conclusion, with positive attitudes and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.

2021上海中考英语作文范文 第21篇

VII.  Writing (作文) （共20分）

94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ I want to invent _____ ”

(以“我想要发明________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

（注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。

2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)

It can be used to…

It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to…